Reviews For Our last summer
Name: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: Jun 12, 2011 03:29 PM · For: Our last summer
Aww this was heartbreaking. To find out that Sophie is Bill's daughter and he'll probably never find her or Laura. Jeez. What I don't understand is why she just left. I mean I understand she had to go to her mom but couldn't she have woken Bill up?
I also don't mean to offend you but maybe you could get a beta because your tenses and use of words sometimes aren't correct and its a little hard to understand.
I really liked this. Maybe you could right a follow up, Bill finding Laura and Sophie....
Author's Response: Thank you very much, well it had been checked by my friend but now I found beta so I'll send it to him :)rnWell it had to be oneshot, but if I come up with something, maybe I will write the second part